Thursday, August 25, 2011

Better Luck Next Time

I wanted to
describe you the way
you would describe
a Tiger.

or a perfect
shard of broken glass.

Something fragile as paper ashes
before they crumble

and hidden
like a small mouse in the wall.

I wanted to get it down perfect.
Perfect as shark's teeth.

This will have to do for now.



  1. this is really well written ... loved coming to your blog and I am fascinated by the collage you have used as a header ... all the best. :)

  2. Anonymous7:17 PM

    I like this one too very much. Sharp, funny, yet pained too.

  3. Anonymous10:44 PM

    Oh yeah, I like this!!


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