Friday, September 23, 2011

advice to a younger man

She is
deep inside
you now.

like a
dagger,
straight to the heart,
(from the back).

the worse is done.
It can only get better from here.

Best to forget that
you once swore to
die for her.
 
Better that
love make a liar of you,
than a damn fool.

11'

1 comment:

  1. Very masculine, very honest, and very well written. Your concise and simplistic composition and choice of words move me.

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