draft 1 needs hook and landing
there are fewer
treachery’s
more :
heinous
underhanded
cold blooded-
than
making a tranformers
movie
just
to kill off optimus
prime,
and have children witness
his Murder.
hero
leader
father figure
killed off for
greed!
murdered
to sell this new hot rod toy
insulting
my child mind
to believe you could
kill off
my friend
and not mourn
as he
transformed
into a
robot angel.
transformed and rolled out
to robot heaven.
the audacity
to try to sell me a hot rod
by killing
my friend
your friend
Our friend.
greed
transforms men to monster
children to cynics
trust to deception
greedy con men
deception a
con
by not men but monsters.
transmission
transgress
trespass against us
the voice of a hero
never to speak again the words-
autobots
transform and roll out
and just
the tears of children
40 years later
still not over it
and if you try
to remind
you he was
resurrected
brought back
from
the
dead
tell me he is risen.
i will punch you in the face
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