Hell Thee

Draft 1 idea 

 I told her I wanted 

Something 

Healthy 

I would deliver 

Out 

A  regiment.

strict-

Supplying that

Vitamin D.

And she 

mined for her  minerals

Keeping time

Counting steps {see if we can organically use watch your steo}

Working it out- 

{maybe flip this line to first and extend}

no need to stop watches 

this {Romeo’s tragically on time and running late}

“the very  pink of courtesy ” 

Regiment 

Supplement

improvement {achievement}

But 

It didn’t work 

out-

Yet 

I’m still sweating 

Repeating 

Our parents 

Training 

Traumas 

{Tradgedys}

I wanted something Healthy  {here we need a bridge to get from mural and tissue possibl pub to the soul) more than body) 

For souls 

To dance

Moved

Loved

Uplifted

But she 

Saying “Do you even lift Bro?”

{One more Romeo and Juliet quote -  reread the apothecary part for material try to remember Shakespeare demon phrase might work better “

But your 

{Soul 

Won’t train.

It damed 

To the darkness

Spiteful 

Demonic

Hurtful

Repeating the past-

And you just gotta get 

Those reps in-

In the Red {is out of the Red a phrase?} 

Out of the blue

In the Pink

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