tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post2094930241466927033..comments2023-05-13T02:11:17.984-07:00Comments on Los Brainiacs: lighthouseThe Nefarious Xhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08048889415064088768noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-40915467110016332752011-09-30T11:26:07.861-07:002011-09-30T11:26:07.861-07:00A modern retelling of an old classic. Do you need ...A modern retelling of an old classic. Do you need the last stanza, though?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-76234316647422642682011-09-29T13:27:05.107-07:002011-09-29T13:27:05.107-07:00Beautiful and really took me for a trip from the s...Beautiful and really took me for a trip from the sound to the eyes.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-1222718504494266532011-09-28T15:11:35.866-07:002011-09-28T15:11:35.866-07:00Straight towards heartbreak. Thanks so much for sh...Straight towards heartbreak. Thanks so much for sharing your wonderful work.GrĂ¥ Skyhttp://graasky.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-44339905556374263692011-09-27T10:19:31.098-07:002011-09-27T10:19:31.098-07:00I'd like to see "its" become "i...I'd like to see "its" become "it's" to indicate the possessive, but aside from that, I really enjoyed this! Here's my entry for the week: http://caridwen.wordpress.com/2011/09/26/drafting-the-orb-weaver/Mellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15247137831515066254noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-74917076192406812852011-09-27T07:12:04.803-07:002011-09-27T07:12:04.803-07:00Ow...ow...ow!
Your sharp point comes through loud ...Ow...ow...ow!<br />Your sharp point comes through loud and clear - like a siren!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-16340030291774059692011-09-26T07:52:49.354-07:002011-09-26T07:52:49.354-07:00Great comparison... So romantic! :)Great comparison... So romantic! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-45687470418600983412011-09-25T16:35:45.896-07:002011-09-25T16:35:45.896-07:00Love this! Great contrast to mythology. I especi...Love this! Great contrast to mythology. I especially like the irony in her eyes being a lighthouse that's leading you into the rocks. Very cool.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-33160851646681868512011-09-22T08:58:55.411-07:002011-09-22T08:58:55.411-07:00a wonderful love story with those eyes that hurrie...a wonderful love story with those eyes that hurried you home! nice one!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-21436860715593004152011-09-22T01:27:22.379-07:002011-09-22T01:27:22.379-07:00Let me fall
Fall into something warm
Something sof...Let me fall<br />Fall into something warm<br />Something soft and sweet and oh, so gentle<br />Let me fall, just fall<br />Fall into the blinding madness and frenzy<br />Right down into the middle of the fire<br />Let me fall, spinning faster<br />Fall, until I am so deeply lost in you<br />I never want to escape this feeling that I'm in<br />I'm consumed by the power of your love<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-52821765504283899392011-09-21T21:51:33.180-07:002011-09-21T21:51:33.180-07:00Unusual..and pretty capturing..I did not know when...Unusual..and pretty capturing..I did not know when it end and from where it began.<br />Very magical!<br /><br /><a href="http://reigningwanderer.blogspot.com/2011/09/connection.html" rel="nofollow">Alcina</a>Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-1611099135390250862011-09-21T21:05:49.160-07:002011-09-21T21:05:49.160-07:00Such a well told story steering your ship full ste...Such a well told story steering your ship full steam ahead guided by the light of the lighthouse heading straight towards the rocks. wow what an ending<br />http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/21/remember-the-years/Ann LeFlorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09421100825301270608noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-48238640757692592012011-09-21T18:50:38.202-07:002011-09-21T18:50:38.202-07:00I think you give in to temptation in the end, and ...I think you give in to temptation in the end, and choose self immolation on the rocks of love? Great poem!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-46728722095030566782011-09-21T16:45:50.694-07:002011-09-21T16:45:50.694-07:00Yes, well told story here.Yes, well told story here.nicolewianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12836201941173083316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-66837816134876235752011-09-21T15:21:40.158-07:002011-09-21T15:21:40.158-07:00A well told story of temptation and denying it.
h...A well told story of temptation and denying it.<br /><br />http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/Marbles in My Pockethttp://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/09/21/in-the-blink-of-an-eye/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221707.post-42884086705161179902011-09-17T19:13:34.219-07:002011-09-17T19:13:34.219-07:00I love the sound of this, and repetition works wel...I love the sound of this, and repetition works well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com